Saturday 16 January 2016

My Real Thing - Progressive feedback

Dear Readers,


I decided to show my working piece to a focus group of girls that suited my demographics to see their reaction and get their feedback on issues:



They helped me by giving me feedback:

- increase the jack in the box effect by a POV shot
- Add more of a dramatic effect on the introduction of the killer - quicker shots flicking between!
- cut one my shots (done already) because i lost her head in the shot.

until next time...

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